tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post8703275917977046218..comments2009-04-18T10:50:02.740+05:30परमजीत बालीhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01811121663402170102paramjitbali@gmail.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-55667762357464019222009-04-18T10:50:00.000+05:302009-04-18T10:50:00.000+05:30बहुत सुन्दर गज़ल है बधाईNirmla Kapilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11155122415530356473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-51840367261447430162009-04-04T22:43:00.000+05:302009-04-04T22:43:00.000+05:30बहुत सुन्दर!Smart Indian - स्मार्ट इंडियनhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11400222466406727149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-61058096269698400032009-04-02T23:36:00.000+05:302009-04-02T23:36:00.000+05:30अच्छी है.....बस थोडी-सी हलकी.....परमजीत की पढ़ी हुई रचनाओं से थोडी कमतर.....!!bhootnath( भूतनाथ)http://www.blogger.com/profile/07142399482899589367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-17876044777011514772009-03-31T18:13:00.000+05:302009-03-31T18:13:00.000+05:30बहुत सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति...Dr.Bhawnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11668381875123135901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-59429025647233537092009-03-31T16:53:00.000+05:302009-03-31T16:53:00.000+05:30बहुत ख़ूब बाली जी। वाह वाह!लाल और बवाल (जुगलबन्दी)http://www.blogger.com/profile/08266959740750664357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-44453083331653738912009-03-30T16:53:00.000+05:302009-03-30T16:53:00.000+05:30हमें भेजने वाले , थी क्या खता हमारी <BR/>पत्थरों के इस जहां में ,किसे दर्द ये बताएं <BR/><BR/>वाह वाह...! बहोत खूब...!!Harkirat Haqeerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-15918075282886471052009-03-29T13:40:00.000+05:302009-03-29T13:40:00.000+05:30बहुत खूब ,लाजवाब.मा पलायनम !http://www.blogger.com/profile/07989374080125146202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-20067727543077654052009-03-28T00:11:00.000+05:302009-03-28T00:11:00.000+05:30sach kahun to ye gazal acchi to hai....magar bahut acchhi to katyi nahin.....!!bhootnath( भूतनाथ)http://www.blogger.com/profile/07142399482899589367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-7486438724706851412009-03-26T14:58:00.000+05:302009-03-26T14:58:00.000+05:30bahut badiya likha haa...........nehahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08487375202677671417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-22373784942493664922009-03-24T07:06:00.000+05:302009-03-24T07:06:00.000+05:30cool gazal.. i liked it...Milanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18133079367951660690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-82249603438099525772009-03-23T07:31:00.000+05:302009-03-23T07:31:00.000+05:30वाह बाली जी कमाल कर दिया, आनन्द साहब की याद आ गयी!<BR/><BR/>---<BR/><A HREF="http://prajapativinay.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">चाँद, बादल और शाम</A><BR/><A HREF="http://pinkbuds.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">गुलाबी कोंपलें</A>विनयhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08734830206267994994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-61516210388644474512009-03-21T16:47:00.000+05:302009-03-21T16:47:00.000+05:30दर्द की सुंदर अभियक्ति है.लेकिन इतना निराशावादी होना भी ठीक नहीं.hem pandeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08880733877178535586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-70179158396901879752009-03-20T22:56:00.000+05:302009-03-20T22:56:00.000+05:30आदरणीय बाली जी ,<BR/>बहुत सुन्दर गजल ...बधाई.<BR/>हेमंत कुमारcreativekonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03899926393197441540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-46996422849107856972009-03-20T18:49:00.000+05:302009-03-20T18:49:00.000+05:30गर सुख के हों जाम, <BR/><BR/>हमेशा हँस-हँस कर पी जाना।<BR/><BR/>गम सीने भरे अगर हों, <BR/><BR/>हाथों में मत जाम उठाना।डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री मयंकhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09313147050002054907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-72711687310337579162009-03-20T14:09:00.000+05:302009-03-20T14:09:00.000+05:30बहुत खूब ......RAJIV MAHESHWARIhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14655178760836239744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-40343520197166579272009-03-20T13:58:00.000+05:302009-03-20T13:58:00.000+05:30एक बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल.....गुनगुनाने का मन हुआरश्मि प्रभाhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-17526643375512946522009-03-20T13:33:00.000+05:302009-03-20T13:33:00.000+05:30हमें भेजने वाले, क्या थी खता हमारी <BR/><BR/>बहुत खूब है ग़ज़ल.......<BR/>इन लाइनों में जिंदगी का रस निचोड़ दिया है आपने, लाजवाबदिगम्बर नासवाhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-53393595490147565872009-03-20T09:11:00.000+05:302009-03-20T09:11:00.000+05:30khub...."अर्श"http://www.blogger.com/profile/15590107613659588862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-654290763185590505.post-13055272080547931162009-03-20T09:03:00.000+05:302009-03-20T09:03:00.000+05:30हमें भेजनें वाले ,थी क्या खता हमारी , <BR/>पत्थरों के इस जहाँ में,किसे दर्द ये बताएं <BR/>waah behad lajawabmehekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16379463848117663000noreply@blogger.com